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can into my stories so I know you'll enjoy them. I slept in and feel
nice today, so I don't think I'll be having many seizures today. (For
those who don't know I have epilepsy, yesterday's post explains the
kind I have in detail.)
I really like today's flash fiction and
I hope you will too.
Her Destination
A young girl with a
Victorian England dress walked through the train on her delicate
feet. The dress's light gray silk looked out of place on the bright
red carpet of the floor. The trimming of her double skirt dress
consisted of folds of gray satin with short tassels. She pulled her
normally long brown hair into a tight bundle on her head. She held
together with a series of carefully placed pins.
She saw a man in a
tattered leather shirt and wool trousers with a wide, white cowboy
hat in a brown booth. He had nasty teeth in his nice smile. He spread
his arms lazily on the side of the booth he sat in. His thick, black
beard gave him an arrogant look. The girl sat on the opposite side of
the booth. She didn't know the man, but she needed company inside the
unfamiliar train.
“When you from?”
the man asked with a grin.
“Pardon me?”
she responded.
“Let me say it
this way, when were you born?” his tone grew more serious.
“Eighteen fifty
one sir.” she found his question a little odd.
“Me, I was born
in eighteen-oh-two, shot dead in eighteen thirty-five.” the girl
looked around the car at the other passengers. There was a man with
robotic parts all over his skin with a cybernetic eye. The man that
sat next to him wore thick samurai armor. Two booths behind those two
a man in a black suit and top hat looked gloomily at the floor. “So
what put you on the train? I hope it wasn't anything nasty.”
“What do you
mean?” she asked.
“What's the last
thing you remember before the train?”
“I remember
laying on my bed. I was very sick.” she mumbled. After another few
seconds a bolt of realization hit her and she began to sweat a
little. “Sir, where are we headed?” A warm gust of wind filled
the car when a woman in thick, red robes entered the cart. She had
shining, white wings coming out of her back. The lady in robes walked
up to the cybernetic man. The train stopped when she began to speak.
“We have reached
your destination, year nineteen-twenty. Come with me.” The man
didn't move at first, but when the woman held out her hand to him, he
grabbed it with relaxed muscles. He walked with the woman, a neutral
expression on his face. A few minutes afterward the train began
moving again.
“Lass, the
question isn't where we're headed, but when we're headed.” the man
went silent. She could tell that the cowboy didn't want to answer any
more questions because that would mean he would be admitting his
answers were true. The girl looked out the window to see billions of
trains inside a field of stars. The trains went in all directions,
many upside down. Then she wondered if she was the one upside down.
She couldn't see a horizon among the stars, the only up she knew was
hers. After an hour of the cowboy remaining silent the train stopped
again and the woman in white robes entered the car again. She walked
up to the cowboy this time.
“We have reached
your destination, year ninteen fifty-six. Come with me.” she held
out her hand and the cowboy's eyes lost their expression. He stood
up, grabbed her hand and the woman led him out of the car. Without
anyone the girl grew more nervous. She lied to herself and thought it
must all be a dream. The train reached another stop. The lady in
robes walked up to her this time. “We have reached your
destination, year twenty-twelve.” the woman held out her hand and
all the willpower in the girl vanished. She stood up and grabbed the
lady's hand. As the lady led her out of the car she forgot what
emotions were, but felt them again when she left the train.
I like how you leave the ending open to the reader's own interpretation, Langdon. Again, you amaze me!
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you are doing this! I believe you are a very talented writer and have a lot to share with the world.
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