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Sunday, February 12, 2012

Shadow World


Well today I'm off to hang out at my girlfriend's house. I won't have enough time to write today's story normally so I'll be reposting something I wrote in 2009. I hope you enjoy it!



Shadow World

         A lone man sat next to a tiny candle in the middle of a blank room. Behind him he could see the door, the only other feature besides himself and the candle in the room. Though really he hardly ever looked at it and its golden doorknob.
          His sunken-in, unblinking eyes locked their gaze on the candle, the only light source in the room. The candle's strong, yet small, flame lit up his ghostly blue eyes. He had on long white pants and a white-sleeved shirt. He wore no shoes because he never left the room. He had a wide grin filled with happiness from his perfect world inside the room.
           He sculpted this world with his own hands. He crafted trees, mountains, clouds, animals and people all by wrapping his hands around the candle’s flame in different ways. He usually started his day by making house and walking into it to find his dog, barking silently on the room’s walls. He made a cell phone to call his nameless friend to his side. The most they could do is play rock-paper-scissors with him acting the parts of both hands. He never beat his friend.
         His most favorite thing in the world was his girlfriend. He crafted her with the perfect figure; she had been shaped with such sensual curves the man felt like he needed nothing else. He could never kiss or hold her in his hands, but he could make her dance. And how she danced was quite incredible it was like watching a living song. And at the end of everyday he said goodbye to the magical world around him as he fell asleep next to the candle that never went out.
         One day someone destroyed his world. Right when his dog barked hello at him he saw the entire world vanish in an instant. Someone had opened the door to the room. He frantically tried to make his dog again to protect him, but he could not, he tried to make his house to hide in, but he could not, he couldn’t even make a tree anymore; the second source of light from beyond the door made his attempts to construct his world futile. He turned away from the light in denial of its existence.
           He half expected to burn in this strange light, but no matter how long he waited nothing terrible happened. The only thing the light did is make him much warmer than the candle ever had. He collapsed to the ground, curling up in a ball. He feared the light that took away all his power of the world.
Through the door came a woman that resembled his girlfriend from the old world. This woman was not crafted by his hands on the wall, she had dimensions beyond his old world. She existed. The mysterious woman of the light descended upon him and picked him off the ground while he still folded himself in a ball next to the candle. She exited the room with him in tow.
           She had pulled him out of a world completely in his control and brought him into a world where he had very little power. But this world was real, with color and volume, with actual people he could hear sing and shake hands with. He had fled this world into the solitary room because of the feelings of weakness it used to give him. He preferred the safety and power of isolation. So for a long time he had lived in his Shadow World, and loved it. But when reality entered his room he realized that he loved the real world more. Fate, and every one of its members controlled the world of the light.

2 comments:

  1. I get your emails the day after you post, but you did this one so early I got the bonus of reading two stories today. This one makes me think of a person who descends into madness, then emerges into sanity once again. Not sure if this was your meaning or intent behind the story, but that's what I love about them...it's open to the reader's interpretation. Well done!

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    1. Thanks! Openess is what I'm going for, though this is actually an older work of mine, I actually changed the ending to make it more open than the original version.

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