Oh, this day is so clear, I didn't have
any Klonopin yesterday, my head feels really good, I got a wonderful
sleep last night with vivid and beautiful dreams and I'm mentally
ready and roaring! Oooooh yeah! XD Even had time to work on my book
and today's story so even better! Yes, the rush of being at full
mental capacity. So yeah, here's today's story!
The City Between
The two lovers held hands while they
walked through the otherwise empty city. Not another soul was in the
massive city, though it had skyscrapers, malls, parks, roads and
sewers. A full moon hung above them, it swayed back and forth like
the clock of a hypnotist. They only thought of each other, not
noticing when they passed directly through the bricks and concrete of
the buildings or when they reached the river at one end of the city
they wrapped back to the other side of the city. They never noticed
that they were more pale and translucent than before they entered the
coffins after the accident.
Bravo! Short with an amazing twist!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I think the shortness, gave it plenty of punch!
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