Well, going to a
welcome back party today for a cousin that went to South Korea(Her
husband is in the military) so I'm excited. I had a to take another
Klonopin, started to get the bad feelings I get before my seizures
get bad, so I took it and I feel much better so I think I stopped the
incidents(I also stopped having seizures I was having) though I'm
afraid it may have hurt today's story editing wise, but I think I
came up with a good concept for today's story so yeah, it'll turn out
good in the end. I hope you enjoy!
The Cyberspace Carnival
Children and adults alike went into
cyberspace alike to witness the carnival coming into their servers.
School work and house work could wait, every Saturday was reserved
for the carnival, and very few families thought otherwise. With
smiles of excitement on their faces families zipped up their virtual
suits and jumped into the reality next door.
Rainbows of fireworks filled the skies
of cyberspace and during the carnival they programmed the grass to
sway like rippling water hit with a rain of pebbles. The people moved
about in this cyberspace enjoying the warm spring atmosphere the
holders of the carnival programmed in for them.
Clowns doing the impossible flew
through the air. In cyberspace, the performers had no limitations, so
feats of danger didn't impress the audience quite as much as the
clowns making stones turn into clouds and then dancing among them. One
of the clowns, creatively named Bozo2373.exe had been programmed with
just enough of a simulation of emotion to be able to smile at the
audience as his act came along. His routine involved him dancing
along with seven other clowns in equally colorful outfits, he smiled
at the audience, he knew joy while he danced so he could smile at any
members of the audience that were looking at him. His happiness ended
as his act did and he vanished into the clown car. In the clown car
he was stuffed into a zip file until the next carnival to be
decompressed and let out to entertain the masses again.
Great descriptive writing in this one!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Yeah, gotta do good description to pull the reader into the story!
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