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Tuesday, July 15, 2014

Today's #flashfiction #PickupsJourney

Hi Ho Hi Ho, Its Off To Work We Go!!”
The A-Team* #quote


Today I went found out that two wrongs don't make a right but three lefts do. Anyway onto the flash fiction!

Pickup's Journey

         “I must get back and warn the colony!” the ant said to herself in ant-speak, a language of pheromones in the air or scrapes of the insects little legs. The queen named her Pickup when she hatched. Yes, ants held names despite how many of them there were. They are each individuals in a colony and most of what a queen does all day is eat, sleep and give birth so when all she does is think of babies then she's going to think of baby names. Pickup did do a good job of picking up things. (As should most ants, but she really did her namesake well, ants believed the name the queen bestowed held blessings within it.) And she picked up something more important than a mere object this day.
        She, unfortunately at first, got lost. Somehow lost the trail left by the other ants. Usually this meant only that if she was lucky she got back and in the worst case died. But Pickup picked up some information on her trip. She found a stash of poison. Normally ants, lacking the ability to read, wouldn't know the substance it. But by the luck of her antenna she had seen it wipe out a rival colony before. She recognized the bottle and knew the humans would dump whatever was inside onto their home if she didn't warn them.
        So she ran back as fast as her exoskeleton covered legs could. Pickup ran and ran. Drops of water began to fall. Rain would be coming. Normally she would dive for cover to avoid being smacked by miniature flood. But she couldn't stop. What if when the rain stopped was the time the human decided to use the poison on her home? Nothing should stop her marathon.
        The ground turned dark as the soil became wet and the rain became more heavy. As the rain drops grew they became boulders of liquid crashing into the ground and tearing specks of dirt around Pickup. Her perception became distorted by the rain. What vision the ant had was blocked by the sheet of water ahead. The rain washed away the pheromones. The wet ground absorbed the sensation of touch in her feet.
         She tried to navigate back to colony off of memory as she glided through her foggy confusion. Pickup's mission helped fight away the fear that clawed at her exoskeleton. But the fear of death started to feel like it would break through it and into her flesh. She felt like she could die at any moment, by the rain or some stray predator. But she had to get home. To the colony. Get there in the time.
        She saw the colony. At last. No ants around it. They already retreated into the mound of dirt. Pickup pulled herself up the mound, slowly. It felt nice and safe. A thump then came from behind her. A long rolling noise thereafter. She recongized it as a ribbit and dug quickly into the hill of the entrance of the colony. She knew she managed to avoid being seen, because if she had, she'd already be dead. After the frog thumped away she pulled herself out of the hill and ran into the entrance.
        Pickup returned home successfully, and talked to the queen. It was a rough journey but they managed to move the colony to another yard and avoid the human dumping poison into the hill the coming morning.

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