I don't feel as good as yesterday, but I
still felt good today. I've been taking extra nasea medication
though(but only two pills as the pharmacist said I could) I really do
hope the doctor gets back to me. Though I also hope that I am
actually just getting used to these side effects as the doctor said I
would. Only time will tell and I do hope I don't go downhill again.
But I'll just keep on dealing with it and working towards getting
better. Seizures are still down so it seems the medication is doing
that which is awesome. Though on worst moments of its side effects it
also makes me so woozy I can't move so uh-oh. But today was good so
woot! Now onto the flash fiction!
Pain Compensation
“One hundred and fifty point thirty
credits?” a man with a sown up palm said with a shocked expression.
“That's it?”
“Weighed with your happy lifestyle
that's all the Suffering Department has deemed your pain worth.”
the woman operating the Suffering Evaluation Machine from behind the
counter said. She thought this must have been the thousandth person
she dealt with today. She sometimes really regretted quitting her
other job in the private sector and moving to this government one,
but this government job paid so much better. “Next please.” she
said with a tone sounding almost as mechanical as the Suffering
Evaluation Machine.
For the machine to work it scanned the
subjects brain to find out their current “Moment of Distress” and
would then decide the compensation they deserve. Though people
wondered about all the politics behind the programming of the
machine.
Next a little girl and a mom walked up
to the machine. The machine scanned the little girl and found the
data for a dog and her hearing apologies from the neighbor for
running it over. She named it “Spot” because that's what she
heard a dog called on a cartoon she watched every Saturday morning.
“Your Suffering has been evaluated at
three hundred credits.” the woman operating the machine, though
tired from her long day had to say something, “Get a new one.”
she wished she could have said it better in a nicer tone.
An old man with long white hair then
approached, his eyes sunken and his face wrinkled like a dusty rug
shoved into the corner. His clothes were worn. He slumped while he
walked but straightened his posture when he stood still.
The machine scanned him, seeing a
quake, a collapsed house, his family inside, and him outside.
“The Suffering Department has
evaluated your pain at Three Hundred Thousand Credits.” the woman
looked at the man as he accepted the money onto his credit card and
left. Seeing the evaluation of this man reminded her why this job
paid so well.
You've been writing some amazing stories the last few days, Langdon. Bravo! And I'm praying your good days will continue. Big hug.
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