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Sunday, July 8, 2012

Today's #Scifi #fantasy short story #HuntingYourself


       Well, I saw the movie Brave today with my family and I really liked it. So here's pretty much how the movie goes: It's one of the those war flicks(I think the title Brave must come from the “bravery of the soldiers”) The thing I immediately noticed about the film is the way it decided to do itself. It was not CGI or live action. It was all clay animation. Quite edgy I must say in this day and age when everybody is using computers. It opened immediately with a battle scene so I didn't really know what was going on, especially since I hadn't looked up the plot before I went to the movies, or read any reviews. It was also a bit difficult to follow because of the directors love of shaky-cam(How he/she edited that in with claymation is beyond me, maybe cropped out smaller pics out of big ones I dunno...) What made it even more confusing was I couldn't who the various sides were. Were they Americans vs Terrorists? Russians vs Chinese? All the uniforms the soldiers were wearing were fictional and every single type of nationality was there in each uniform group(there were two different uniform types, one generally blue and one generally red) I guessed that it was two divided national alliances fighting against each other. The claymation battle sequences were intense enough at that point that was I was forgiving my confusion.
        After probably a good fifteen minutes of fighting I finally got some exposition from one random soldier who decided to complain about the situation. Apparently the soldiers in red are the villains. They are all evil clones of humans controlled by aliens. And the blue are soldiers from every nation fighting against them. I would have preferred to have known that earlier during the movie so I could be rooting for the good guys instead of the movie people making it a “plot twist” but whatever, it's not too big of a complaint for me.
       Upon this plot twist the aliens bring in their mother ships to drop in more evil clones. Suddenly it pans over to a meeting room of some UN officials. These officials have a literal fifteen minute debate about using their secret weapon. (This really slows the movie down) They decide to use it and it turns out it is called a mini-nuke-shower-death.(Apparently the writers are not good at coming up with secret weapon names) I got bored during the debate but when the aliens were being showered by thousands of claymation nukes I was quite impressed with the spectacle(clay animation nuclear explosions are weird but very impressive) and that actually turns out to be the formula for the movie. They fight the aliens with their normal soldiers, the aliens bring out more ships or clones or something and then the humans debate about using super weapon then they use it and they keep doing that until the aliens are defeated. It is impressive how many different weapons they come up with. First time I ever saw a clay animated laser cannon.
         Nah, just kidding! Brave is actually an awesome CGI film made by Pixar people who made Up and other CGI wonders like Toy Story. I really recommend it! A friend's coming over today so I decided to use an old story from my story-a-day I did back in 2009 way before I did this blog. I decided I'd rather post a story I knew was good instead of just pulling out something bad at the last minute. Anyway I hope you enjoy! It's one of my personal favorites from back then. It's also one of my weirdest. This has not been altered at all from its 2009 form at all, I haven't even edited it, so you can see how I've changed. Any oddities in format is because its taken from an older document so sorry.



     Hunting Yourself

         You were your most difficult prey. You couldn’t use guns, nets, boomerangs or arrows to catch yourself. None of those mundane tools would work; you had to catch yourself with your bare hands. You were close, very close, but when you saw yourself approach the edge of the woods you feared the chase was over forever.
        You saw the forest as your last route of escape. Looking in the distance behind you, you saw yourself barreling towards you. The hungry eyes of yourself struck fear into you. The idea of that predator catching up to you scared you, and that was all you could think about.
        Your belly rumbled as you wanted for yourself, only you could end your own hunger. As a person dying of starvation, your gut twisted when you ran into the forest; luckily you had the energy to follow.
        The forest became obviously the last place you wanted to escape into. Because, in fact, the woods were yourself too. The stream was your doubts, flowing through you, the rocks your morals and values standing strong. The blades of grass were your loves, gently tickling your feet. As you saw the trees, your growing desires, blanketing yourself in shadows, you realized that perhaps inside yourself was the best place to hide from yourself.
        The chase could not stop; you needed to be fed, to have yourself be yours. When you started to hide inside yourself though, the pursuit became far more difficult. Whenever you got ahead, you doubled your pace to keep up. Yourself seemed to know the way around yourself better than you did. The running had started to wear away at you. Your legs began to feel like they were stabbing themselves after every step.
         You were filled with hope when you began to falter and stumble behind you. However it wasn’t long before you began to feel tired as well, you fell into a stumble just like yourself did moments ago. Eventually you had to stop, luckily, you had to as well. You and yourself both collapsed in the Meadow.
         The Meadow was the center of yourself, the river, the trees, the rocks the grass, they all met here becoming your heart. Now you and yourself were trapped inside you.
        You looked at yourself and you looked back. Both the predator and prey gazed at themselves in confusion. You knew you would get back up eventually, and yourself as well. A truce existed only as an impossibility, you could never trust yourself.
        It was then when you entered. You looked upon yourself and yourself and around at yourself, feeling only pity for yourself. You stood clothed, while yourself and yourself both lay on the ground cold and naked. You didn’t realize your nudeness until you looked at yourself wearing some clothes of your own. This only situation made you feel very embarrassed and very alone, with no one but yourself to keep you company.
        You cupped some water from the river from yourself and brought it to yourself and yourself. You drank it hastily and thanked yourself. It was then that you left yourself to think about yourself, in all that loneliness. You didn’t even have yourself to keep you company anymore, only you was there. You could think only of yourself and how far away you were. This eternal chase scared you; this impossible run strained you too much. You cried.
         Then you saved yourself. But you could not by ending the chase that could not happen. You saved yourself by realizing there was no chase. You stopped looking at you in the distance, or you all around you. You just looked at you. You realized that the only way to find yourself was to stop looking.

 
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